Last week we had to create a plan for our Matariki narrative's and then we would write our story starting with the orientation to the conclusion. Here's mine
Hi kahukura its Quineil I like your characters (maybe because I'm on of them) and how you said Minnie, Vinnie and Winnie. They must be triplets. I like how you didn't write a whole story and just put the main points of the story. I can't wait to see your Narrative. See you later :)
Kia Ora Kahukura, I really enjoyed reading your blog post. I think you have created some great ideas in order to tell your story. I wonder if you could also add in some cool adjectives or Adverbs that would help describe the monster or the feelings of your characters that you can then add into your story. Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing your story!
Hi kahukura its Quineil
ReplyDeleteI like your characters (maybe because I'm on of them) and how you said Minnie, Vinnie and Winnie. They must be triplets. I like how you didn't write a whole story and just put the main points of the story. I can't wait to see your Narrative. See you later :)
Kia Ora Kahukura, I really enjoyed reading your blog post. I think you have created some great ideas in order to tell your story. I wonder if you could also add in some cool adjectives or Adverbs that would help describe the monster or the feelings of your characters that you can then add into your story. Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing your story!
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